Happy writing day.

The scene was everything I hoped for, and then some… there’s an unexpected bit of foreshadowing that made me want to jump up and down and point in delight, and Dexter’s sense of humor came through in a way it definitely hadn’t in her first scene. Certain conflicts were set up very nicely, and I’m altogether pleased with it. It was a lot of fun to write. And? I hit 5,000 words.

Also, met some cool people at the write-in today. So it was a very happy writing day. I may write more later, or I may not. I feel fresh and happy with my story so far, and that’s a nice feeling. I have another short Dexter scene next, one of the very first scenes that I came up with, and that will lead right into Marie’s next scene, another major one, in a different way.

Because I love this scene so much, I think I may just snippet the entire thing. It’s about 1800 words, and all the usual copyright and first draft disclaimers apply …  Continue reading


Time for a breeze to shake the house of cards

I finished scene 3 this morning, thanks to the AIM WrimoWars chatroom. The first three scenes were fine when I envisioned them, but they lost something in translation–I think I’m going to need to go back and streamline quite a bit when I edit.

But then I wrote the first 85 words of scene four, and hopped into the shower, both to bathe, and to think about where this scene would go. And this scene, which was originally just a placeholder to get me where I needed to go, and then later became something a little more interesting when I changed the setting, has become a really fun scene. I’m looking forward to it–there’s a bit of humor, a bit of the ghost (though no one will realize it yet, thanks to the Sixth Sense rules)–and most importantly, it sets up the major emotional throughline for Dexter in a way thats more interesting than her just sitting around being bored with her life. 

Of to it! I have 3,264 words now. I’d like to get at least 1500 out of this scene. I’m still going for 10K today, but honestly, at this point, I’ll be happy with whatever I end up with.

The birth of Dexter Moon.

I fell asleep last night thinking about the first few scenes of my novel (unfortunately, I’ve forgotten all the really cool stuff I remember coming up with–mostly one-off lines of dialogue, I think), and woke up this morning utterly convinced that today was the first day of NaNoWriMo, and I that I needed to get up and start writing, now.

Sadly, it’s still day-before-NaNoWriMo, and thus, all my writing impulses have been thwarted.

My 2008 NaNovel is entitled Dexter Moon, which also happened to be the title of my 2007 NaNovel. The two have nothing to do with each except for that, however. My 2007 NaNovel ended up changing in form and tone quite a bit after I came up with the title and a main character one cold (ish) night at the Fort Lauderdale beach. If I ever do anything more with that novel, it’ll likely end up being a short story or novella titled Betty Spark. But I loved the title, and loved the name, and just really wanted to write that novel, as well. In some ways, perhaps, it’s another way of holding onto my mother, who also really liked the title and the name.

(The name Dexter Moon, by the way, was directly inspired by Dexter Flowers, an author who contributed to an anthology Baby Remember My Name, which I read just before beginning NaNoWriMo last year. I loved her piece, but I especially loved her name, and I would have stolen it verbatim if I could’ve, although I think I actually love Dexter Moon a tiny bit more. I think it works better as a title, at any rate.)

This year’s Dexter Moon also comes from a visit to the beach, though in this case it was a vacation on an island off the coast of South Carolina. I started playing around with an idea of a woman who somehow starts to see ghosts, and who needs desperately to move out of her ex’s apartment. It’s a story that’s intended to be sort of darkly humorous, which fit the title. I saw a woman who looked like a Dexter in a car next to ours as we were driving back, and figured I was pretty much set. 

And then I started thinking about boarding schools, and how much fun it would be to set a story in a boarding school. Not that I’ve ever been to boarding school, but I had a couple of friends in college who had, and it always intrigued me. 

I have this idea that in order to write a good, interesting, unique novel, you really need two good ideas that fit together in an unusual way. Holly Lisle would call it a twist, but it’s not that, exactly. For example, my 2006 novel came about because of these two ideas: a race of werewolves that are almost entirely female, and a woman who’s driving across the country because she can’t stand staying in one place. The idea of a race of female werewolves in itself was interesting, but it didn’t really lead itself to conflict. However, throw it in as background to a cross-country road trip, and I had a story that’s unlike anything else that’s been done. I think, anyways. 

So here were my two ideas: Dexter Moon, seeing ghosts, trying to make money so she could move out on her own, and another girl in a boarding school somewhere, who was also seeing ghosts. It’s when I fit them together, and decided that they would have the same name (thus keeping the title of the book…) that it really turned into something special.

Getting Ready for NaNoWriMo 2008


The cover of my 2008 NaNovel, Dexter Moon

The cover of my 2008 NaNovel, Dexter Moon


I’m getting ready for NaNoWriMo 2008. I’ve discovered, in my couple of years doing AugNoWriMo, that I really love having a place to keep track of my thoughts and include snippets. So that’s what this is.  And just to get things started here, this is something I wrote for a thread on personal (physical) NaNoWriMo journeys, that ended up being really interesting to me after I finished writing it.


2001, high school senior, written on my desktop “Ursula” (though I don’t think I’d named it yet), in Los Angeles, while in the middle of college applications and my senior project, a paper on the creative process of writing.

2002, my first year of college, (Massachusetts) the timing was awful–my laptop (Beatrice) was having major issues, so I handwrote about 3,000 words in a composition book before giving up.

2003, sophomore year, I wrote about 30K (maybe a bit less) and was already running behind by Thanksgiving break, which I spent with a friend in CT, and didn’t write a single word the entire time–but for some reason, I always associate that NaNoWriMo with that visit. Got back to school, and wasn’t able to pick it up again.

2004, was living with relatives in northern VA and commuting into Washington DC for an internship–I handwrote every morning on the metro, and for the first time, actually won NaNoWriMo, although it was with a horrible confused mess of a draft that I’ve refused to even look at ever since.

2005, back at school, wrote something, but I don’t remember anything else about it–I didn’t get very far.

2006, I’d graduated, and found a job in Florida, which started in October–I took my cross-country drive as the background for a story about werewolves and various other mythical creatures. I didn’t know ANYbody in Florida, so I spent all my time warring against an online buddy, and everyday spoke to my mom who had heard me talk about NaNoWriMo for years and finally decided to participate herself. That’s one of my really precious memories of her now, actually. (She just passed away a couple of months ago.) My second win, and I crossed the finish line in a coffeeshop at a write-in, which was the way I met the first people I knew in Florida.

2007, I was crazy busy, had just joined a roller derby league, which was taking up all my time, but for some reason, I jumped in to ML for my region when no one else stepped up. I organized a couple of write-ins a week, and pretty much ONLY wrote during those write-ins, giving up on the idea of winning in favor of just making it through to the end of November. 🙂

2008, I’m back in Northern Virginia, living with relatives again, looking for a job, and hoping for my third win.